Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Of No Importance

Okay... I'm still working on the other poem, but here's a short one I want you all to read and to tell me what you think it's about.

And I actually wrote it having two ideas in mind, trying to link them together. No, I do not have that much of a disturbed mind, just wanted to try and write about an ambiguous topic. So you have to tell me one, the other or both.

Have a stab.

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Her face is pressed against the dashboard.
Somehow his entire body fits behind hers in the front half of the car.
Emotions soared.
The jolts of the car are surprising.

Outside,
There are sirens wailing,
People are crying,
Traffic has stopped.
The tragedy continues playing,
Outside.

3 comments:

  1. Okay...it's either about a car crash, mutilated bodies, ambulances etc


    OOOOOOORRRR (which is MUCH more likely)

    It's about a couple having sex in the front seats, and everyone outside is watching/disgusted, while the cops arrive in the distance.

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  2. hmm..i thought it was tha third thing that bas sed lol..nd then it sounds more lyk a car crash in tha second part..thats pretty cool..well..sad..buh still cool..

    hmm..shood study fo chemm >.<

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  3. ooh..i ment 4th..tha making out one..

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